Saturday, February 12, 2011

Bobbees post thing

Dear, Chase and Alena.
   My phragraph is just about
      1) Algernon lying about the cucumbers. my contrete detail is Algernon lied to cover up the fact he did smething wrong. my commentarys are he never fess up to what he did. It was sometimes god to lie so there wouldnt be any consuquences.

      2) Lady Bracknell telling Cecily tht it was right to change her age. CD: Lady Bracknell thought it was acceptable to lie. CM: for  woman it was polite to lie. lieimg was openly expected by all.

The third paragraph i sumarized the ta party of Gwendolen and Cecily.

     3) CD: Cecily and Gwendolen used untruthulness in their little scrape at the tea party. CM: it would hv been very unfashion able to show their annoyance for each other. ( I need ne more)

What i ned help on is making a topic sentence and I need one more commentary for my third pargraph. Thanks